# Coset Codes-Part I: Introduction and Geometrical Classification

**Date**: 03/03/2026
**Domain**: computer_science/information_theory
**Taxonomy**: academic/research_paper
**Filter**: Active comments

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## Overall Feedback

Here are some overall reactions to the document.

**Absence of Empirical Validation**

The paper presents extensive theoretical comparisons of coding gains and error coefficients but provides no simulation results or experimental data to validate these parameters against actual bit error rates in realistic channel conditions. For a top-tier publication, theoretical claims regarding performance metrics should be substantiated with empirical evidence or rigorous simulation studies to ensure the derived parameters translate to practical system performance. The reliance on prior work without new verification limits the credibility of the comparative analysis.

**Reliance on Heuristic Performance Metrics**

The derivation of 'effective coding gain' explicitly depends on a 'rule of thumb' that the author acknowledges is only approximately valid for moderately low error rates. This introduces significant uncertainty into the primary estimand of the paper. A more rigorous statistical characterization of the error probability bounds, rather than heuristic approximations, is necessary to support the strong claims made about the superiority of certain code classes over others.

**Qualitative Complexity Assessment**

Decoding complexity is a key parameter for comparing the proposed code classes, yet it is evaluated using qualitative descriptions and implementation-dependent rules rather than a formalized computational complexity metric. This lack of quantification makes the trade-off analysis between coding gain and complexity subjective and difficult to reproduce. A standardized measure of computational cost is required to validate the claims regarding implementation efficiency.

**Restricted Scope of Classification**

While the abstract claims that 'practically all known good constructive coding techniques' can be characterized as coset codes, the methodology explicitly restricts the analysis to 'lattice-type coset codes' with only brief mention of others. This selection bias undermines the universality of the proposed framework. The exclusion of non-lattice schemes from the detailed comparison creates a gap between the stated research question and the actual scope of the analysis.

**Incomplete Argument Synthesis**

The manuscript concludes with an empty Section VIII, leaving the paper without a formal conclusion that synthesizes the findings and outlines implications for future research or standardization. This gap prevents a clear summary of how the geometric classification advances the field beyond the existing literature. A substantive conclusion is necessary to articulate the specific contributions and limitations of the proposed taxonomy.

**Theoretical Framework Without Empirical Validation**

The paper presents a purely theoretical mathematical framework for coset codes with coding gain formulas and lattice classifications, but contains no empirical methodology, simulation design, or experimental data to validate the theoretical assumptions. The fundamental coding gain calculations (e.g., y(C) = 2^(-p(C)) * d_min^2(C)) are derived mathematically but not tested against actual communication system performance. While appropriate for a theoretical paper, this means the theoretical assumptions about lattice density, partition structures, and distance properties remain unverified against practical implementation constraints such as channel noise characteristics, decoder complexity limits, or finite-precision arithmetic effects that would affect real-world performance.

**Status**: [Pending]

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## Detailed Comments (20)

### 1. Absence of Empirical Validation [CRITICAL]

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> provides no simulation results or experimental data to validate these parameters against actual bit error rates

**Feedback**:
Theoretical claims regarding performance metrics must be substantiated with empirical evidence. Add simulation results comparing derived parameters (coding gain, error coefficients) against actual bit error rates in realistic channel conditions, or explicitly state the limitations of the theoretical model regarding practical implementation.

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### 2. Reliance on Heuristic Performance Metrics

**Status**: [Pending]

**Quote**:
> derivation of 'effective coding gain' explicitly depends on a 'rule of thumb' that the author acknowledges is only approximately valid

**Feedback**:
A 'rule of thumb' introduces significant uncertainty into the primary estimand. Provide a rigorous statistical characterization of error probability bounds or justify the heuristic approximation with bounds on its validity range to support claims of superiority.

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### 3. Qualitative Complexity Assessment

**Status**: [Pending]

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> evaluated using qualitative descriptions and implementation-dependent rules rather than a formalized computational complexity metric

**Feedback**:
Qualitative descriptions make trade-off analysis subjective. Define a standardized measure of computational cost (e.g., FLOPs per bit, trellis state count) to validate claims regarding implementation efficiency and allow reproducibility.

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### 4. Restricted Scope of Classification

**Status**: [Pending]

**Quote**:
> methodology explicitly restricts the analysis to 'lattice-type coset codes' with only brief mention of others

**Feedback**:
The abstract claims 'practically all known good constructive coding techniques' are characterized, but the analysis is restricted. Revise the abstract to qualify the scope (e.g., 'lattice-based techniques') or include non-lattice schemes to avoid selection bias.

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### 5. Incomplete Argument Synthesis

**Status**: [Pending]

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> manuscript concludes with an empty Section VIII, leaving the paper without a formal conclusion

**Feedback**:
An empty conclusion section prevents a clear summary of contributions. Draft a substantive Section VIII that synthesizes findings, outlines implications for future research or standardization, and explicitly states the limitations of the proposed taxonomy.

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### 6. Misleading Claim on Decoding Complexity

**Status**: [Pending]

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> decoding complexity, and the constellation expansion factor, are purely geometric parameters determined by C and A/A'

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Decoding complexity depends on algorithmic structure, not just geometry. Rewrite this claim to distinguish between geometric parameters (e.g., distance) and algorithmic factors (e.g., decoder search space) to ensure accuracy.

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### 7. Overstated Universality Claim

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> Practically all known good constructive coding techniques for band-limited channels... can be characterized as coset codes

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This sweeping claim is unsupported for modern techniques like LDPC or polar codes. Revise to specify 'lattice-based' techniques or list specific exclusions to avoid misleading readers about the framework's universality.

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### 8. Ambiguous Coset Code Definition

**Status**: [Pending]

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> A coset code is defined by a lattice partition A / A' and by a binary encoder C that selects a sequence of cosets

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The definition lacks constraints on encoder C (e.g., causal, linear, finite-state). Add specificity to align with implementable systems (e.g., Ungerboeck codes) to ensure the class is well-defined.

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### 9. Missing Coding Gain Formula

**Status**: [Pending]

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> In fact, where the normalized redundancy p(C) (per two dimensions) is equal to 2r(C)/N

**Feedback**:
The phrase 'In fact,' is followed by a blank space where the equation should be. Explicitly state the fundamental coding gain formula (e.g., y(C) = d_min^2(C) / 2^{p(C)}) to allow verification of calculations.

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### 10. Incorrect Gain Calculation Syntax

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> the fundamental coding gain y(C) is 2-l.4 = 2 (3.01 dB)

**Feedback**:
The expression '2-l.4 = 2' is arithmetically nonsensical. Correct to '2^{-1} * 4 = 2' or '4/2 = 2' to clearly show the operation intended in the derivation.

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### 11. Unsubstantiated Shape Gain Claim

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> y, is usually much smaller than y(C), being upper-bounded by the shape gain of an N-sphere

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The claim that shape gain is 'much smaller' is an overgeneralization; in high dimensions, it can be significant. Qualify this statement with typical values or remove 'much' to avoid misleading readers.

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### 12. Undefined Binary Lattice Term

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> when A and A' are binary lattices, the order of the partition is a power of 2, say 2k+r

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The term 'binary lattices' is used without definition here, yet it is critical for the power-of-2 claim. Define it (e.g., quotient group isomorphic to (Z_2)^m) or reference Section II where it is defined.

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### 13. Binary Lattice Definition Specificity [MINOR]

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> A real N-dimensional lattice A is a binary lattice if it is an integer lattice that has 2"ZN as a sublattice for some m

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The definition relies on the existence of 2^m ZN but does not explain the significance of '2-depth'. Briefly elaborate on why this property is useful for coding applications to justify the classification.

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### 14. Redundancy Notation Overload [MINOR]

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> the redundancy r(C) is equal to the sum of the redundancy r ( C ) of the encoder C and the redundancy r ( A ) of the lattice A

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The symbol r(C) denotes both total code redundancy and encoder redundancy in the same sentence. Use distinct symbols (e.g., r_enc) to prevent confusion in the coding gain formula.

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### 15. Garbled Minimum Distance Notation [MINOR]

**Status**: [Pending]

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> the minimum squared distance d;,(C) between signal point sequences in C

**Feedback**:
The notation 'd;,(C)' contains scanning errors. Standardize to d_min^2(C) or d_free^2(C) throughout to ensure clarity in the fundamental coding gain equation.

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### 16. Corrupted Asymptotic Gain Formula [MINOR]

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> whch for N even is G,= T( n + 1)/[6( n!)''"], where n = N/2

**Feedback**:
The formula contains severe OCR errors ('T', '''"', 'ne'). Correct to standard mathematical notation involving the Gamma function to ensure theoretical bounds are reproducible.

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### 17. Inconsistent Distance Notation in Section II [MINOR]

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> The minimum nonzero norm is thus the _minimum squared_ _distance d il n ( A )_ between any two points in A

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The notation 'd il n ( A )' is garbled. Standardize to d_min^2(A) consistent with Section I to avoid confusion between lattice and code distance parameters.

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### 18. Lemma 1 Volume Relation Clarity [MINOR]

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> Lemma 1: If A' is a sublattice of A of order lA/A'l, then V(A') = IA/A'lV(A)

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The notation 'lA/A'l' and 'IA/A'l' is inconsistent (lowercase 'l' vs uppercase 'I'). Standardize to |A/A'| to clearly denote the order of the partition in the volume scaling law.

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### 19. Mod4 Distance Formula Errors [MINOR]

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> d i i n ( ~ ) = min[16,4dH(c1), _d,(cO)]_

**Feedback**:
The notation 'd i i n ( ~ )' and '_d,(cO)]_' is heavily corrupted. Correct to d_min^2(A) and d_H(C_0) to ensure the minimum distance calculation for mod4 lattices is readable and verifiable.

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### 20. Dual Lattice Definition Notation [MINOR]

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> we define its _dual lattice_ AL as the set of all Gaussian integer N-tuples _y_ that are orthogonal to all vectors x E A modulo _+ p,_

**Feedback**:
The notation 'AL', '_+ p,' and 'x E A' contains OCR errors. Correct to A^perp, (1+i)^p, and x in A to ensure the orthogonality condition for dual lattices is mathematically accurate.

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