The current page has good bones but feels sparse. Pick the direction that feels right for Axiom's audience.
Lead with technical credibility. Add a terminal-style animated demo, security proof points with icons, and a feature matrix. Appeals to the DevOps/SRE persona who wants to know exactly what they're getting before they click anything.
Lead with a dashboard screenshot/mockup so visitors immediately see what they're getting. Headline focuses on the outcome ("Run jobs on any machine, securely"), with a live-ish demo widget. Broad appeal โ shows rather than tells.
Open with the pain (SSH sprawl, no audit trail, unsigned scripts running as root). Then position Axiom as the fix. Longer page with a narrative arc โ resonates with buyers who need to justify the tool to a team or manager.